Was it me or was it you?

25 May

Who did I hug today
Who did my words disgrace?
Was it for you I knelt to pray
Was it me that I put in place?

Whose hands did I hold in mine?
Whose tears did I wipe away?
When for you I didn’t let the light shine
Was it me that I led astray?


Posted by on May 25, 2013 in Poetry


6 responses to “Was it me or was it you?

  1. Sue Dreamwalker

    June 5, 2013 at 8:26

    We forget with each action of our own we can either heal or wound.. I hope I gave plenty of Hugs today and lots of smiles.. just had to come back to this poem Nadira, as I commented via phone some days ago and it froze on me and wouldn’t publish!…
    Hope all is well in your world.. Sending you a Hug ~Sue 🙂

  2. Thumbelina81

    May 31, 2013 at 8:26

    A poignant question to ask when things go wrong.. loved the write.

  3. P C Jain

    May 26, 2013 at 8:26

    what an expression of great sentiment so beautifully put.tks for sharing

  4. granny1947

    May 26, 2013 at 8:26

    Ouch…you hit a sore spot.

  5. Butterflies of time

    May 26, 2013 at 8:26

    Yes.. something I should never forget to stop and ask me. Lovely!

  6. souldipper

    May 25, 2013 at 8:26

    Oh yes…


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