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“I am dumb to tell” -borrowed from Dylan Thomas

02 Aug

http://souldipper.wordpress.com/2012/08/01/occupy-blogosphere-thursday-august-2-2012/

This is my contribution to the above link:  Hope you like it Amy:-)

You fling your chiselled  words at me

Well aimed, intended to hurt.

I twist and turn and then flee

My mind in disconcert.

Afar,  I find a place to sit

In a silent, empty nook

The darts embedded, I slowly pick

Quite a while, it took.

Then I heard the urgent  voice

Of the tiny red-hued drops.

And from my hurt , this I learnt

When your pain ends, mine stops.

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5 Comments

Posted by on August 2, 2012 in Poetry, Reflections

 

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5 responses to ““I am dumb to tell” -borrowed from Dylan Thomas

  1. Jolly

    August 7, 2012 at 8:26

    Lovely poem … we are all connected, aren’t we?

     
    • dreamingthruthetwilight

      August 7, 2012 at 8:26

      We are Jolly. Isn’t it sad that we fell it only sometimes and for the rest of the time, our indivdual egos get in the way.?

       
  2. souldipper

    August 2, 2012 at 8:26

    Nadira…what a message – so well written! I like the nudge given above.

     
  3. P C JAIN

    August 2, 2012 at 8:26

    Good composition I wud again nudge U to get pblished

     

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